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Score: 9

"well done"

by: XXXWANTEDXXX

date: January 5, 2009

The characterization and story was shown a lot more in this one and indeed is an improvement. i look forward to the next part of your story! you have nothing to worry about if you take your time and put effort into it. because when you do, it is very easy to tell. =)

Score: 9

"its better than the last"

by: thelittleemo

date: December 6, 2008

i like it, although i dont really understand the story is it girl likes boy, buy likes girl kinda thing? well the animation is really good

Score: 9

"YE GODS!"

by: Camper-Psycho

date: November 25, 2008

and I thought the last one was interesting, this just plain rocks! Keep more coming!

Score: 10

"/smile"

by: AppleJackFury

date: November 25, 2008

I liked it. It was good for being new.
It made me smile. I'm thinking you're on your way to being very good.
Keep up all the good work! :D
5/5 and 10/10 from me.

Score: 10

"awesome"

by: tigerskinz

date: November 24, 2008

this is way better than anything I've ever made in flash and boy is that a giant fact
NO RUNNING IN THE HALL! there emo girl you've hopefully learned your lesson!

Score: 7

"Not bad"

by: DeathVador

date: November 24, 2008

This is a good animation. Plain and simple. I like the graphics, I like theam and the story is actualy pretty neat as well. Even though it's about an emo it is not depressing and actually has a rather happy ending. There's talent but still room for improvement, as there is with everyone. Keep working at this and I'm sure that you'll be getting 4's in no time.

Score: 8

"HAYDS510..."

by: DeathChain01

date: November 24, 2008

...here's a thought. What if, WHAT IF carolshki27 here was actually an ex gov't markswoman who was at the top of her class. One day she decided that she didn't like people who thought emos were faggots.

Not quite sure how long you'd last.

With that out of the way, I suggest you work on the image quality. Those looked like they were all .jpgs

.png is a whole lot better. Doesn't screw up the image.

Tho if Movie maker is what's causing the image's craptasticness, then there'sa not much I can do besides suggest investing in Flash/using methods the govt doesn't want you to use (Limewire, a website that just stating its existence in this space will get my account deleted, or any other unfit for public known use of).

I happen to have acquired it that way myself. never got around to actually using it tho. I'm a Pivot guy.

Having strayed off topic severely, let's get back.

The story is pretty good, and i think that if you do it rite, you can get WMM to use frames like an FBF animation. Poke around. the story is OK, could use an unexpected twist though. Like the planet breaks in half or something.

I dunno.

Score: 9

"that's the stuff"

by: Katokun

date: November 24, 2008

yeahhh that's the ticket

nice
BUT
i couldn't read the thing at the end...
ya know, when she wrote in her diary
well that's all

oohhhh and also, i almost forgot!
that was sexy ^^

Score: 10

"Dude...."

by: yoyo911

date: November 23, 2008

You are being a bit rude for this movie.... it was a good work for a newstarter, you shouldn't give low score because you didn't like the theme. :(
I think it IS a good theme: i'm not emo I just..... look them has different people even when ''they dress like everyone else''.

(talked to HAYDS510)

Score: 5

"emos are fags"

by: HAYDS510

date: November 23, 2008

grab yourself flash from somewhere if ya got enough money.. or if not *cough lime wire*
for starters the story was ok but it was hard to folow since there wasnt a preloader, it be like play.. freeze.. play freeze.. but your newish so ill let that slide by..
do somethin happy though next time (this is just my opinion, not tryna pick a fight with anyone) but Emos are Faggets! they listen to shit music and theyr all bout their look. if theyr that depressed why cant they finish the job?? cuttin themselfs is there way of saying "i'm too much of a bitch to end it but i'll make it look like i want too" + they want to be different from the "conformists" well why do they dress the same? thats not being different, thats being the same..as eachother.. thats just my say though, i dont like whiney depressing people..
sorry if i fucked anyone off but thats tough shit.

back to the movie 5/10 3/5