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Score: 10

"That was pretty good!"

by: Andekas

date: October 30, 2008

I liked the chara syle a lot, they were drawn really creatively, some of the backgrounds were awesome, for example the one in the scene where they walk outside in the rain. Another thing that i liked was how the car rode into the building, was done very nicely too. Voices were over avarage, but, in my opion you should try to make your scenes a little shorter and show different angles. That's something you have to practice, it's my biggest mistake, as well! so keep it up! Peace!

Score: 2

"Promising style, still needs work"

by: Kaezon

date: October 30, 2008

I saw promising style in the way you draw you characters. If you put more attention into your backgrounds, and scenery, I'd put at least 3 more stars up. Also had trouble reading the speech text. Consider using speech bubbles, or an alternative? Animation techniqe needs some refinement as well.
Please keep working at it.

Score: 6

"umm..."

by: mrforder

date: October 30, 2008

That was pretty nice. I liked it a little. Nothing special though.