Score: 10
"At a loss for words..."
date: October 18, 2009
Wow, great style, art, storytelling, everything! Your nuclear sub shocked me, it looks identical to an actual Trident-class ICBM launch sub! However, your story says it starts at 6:03 a.m., and America gets involved at 11:04 a.m., that I can see happening, but the first nuke was launched at 3:43 p.m. that day. I can see America shooting off nukes at Iran, but I doubt things would deteriorate so fast that in about 5 hours time, we'd go from convential exchanges of firepower to nuking the Hell out of each other. Maybe in a few months, or even a few weeks, but not in five hours. Also, a ICBM sub would never fire from shallow waters like that or anywhere near another vessel. They'd do it in the middle of the ocean so they aren't detected and can go dark on the ocean floor if need be.
