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Score: 7

"well not bad but,,,"

by: ziggy14845

date: November 1, 2009

theres alot of things that can be fixed:
1. mario cant "switch" between power ups because i saw him go to fireflower 3 times so lose that
2. you should just have him use 1 power up at a time & some time betwwen when he loses one then uses the next
3. yeah i believe goku should go super sayan near the end & mario should combine his star & feather together so he could "power up" or go super sayan luke goku if you wish
4. you could improve the qality on the landscape when close up
5. also just as there facing off you should have 2 buttons that allow people to choose who wins
6. also you could add alternate ending buttons ass well so luigi comes in & kiks goku in the nuts from behind & then they double team on him or krillen comes in & blasts mario just as mario is gonna kill goku
7. maybe add a backstory (short) off how there fates intertwined, like goku could off been framed for killing peach & mario then trakcs him down to your choice of landscape

over all you have a good concept just need to improve

Score: 10

"mario should win not lose"

by: shiloweston1

date: October 17, 2009

and on the fire flower and all he would kick his ass and win from the first movement so you stuiped and dumb dumbass

Score: 9

"HEY darkkid95!"

by: nightscloud2

date: October 17, 2009

dont tell someone what they SHOULD have done you ass! if you dont like they way THEY did it, then DO IT YOURSELF maybe YOU should change it! BITCH! PWNED! i would have easily gave this a 10 if i never saw SMBZ but, that by far is the best mario flash of all time.

Score: 10

"Cool but mario is not that strong"

by: darkkid95

date: October 11, 2009

dude super saiyan goku easily kicks mario's ass, so you should've used goku kaioken and in the end the impact from mario's fire ball and gokus ssj3 attack started clashing wich was wrong so it should've been tat goku won immediatelt, but it was cool man I wish I could do that XD

Score: 6

"Fair."

by: Wenui

date: September 7, 2009

Just fair.
Practice makes perfection.

Score: 8

"Entertaining but..."

by: zigan706

date: August 30, 2009

Goku would've killed him in one blast and you could've used some more sound effects and some of them didn't go right with the battle but nonetheless it was worth the time

Score: 8

"Fantastic"

by: Itame

date: August 16, 2009

You should make a sequel but make sure someone wins at the end and don't just make it Mario's winning by loads at some points and Goku's winning by loads at others.

Score: 5

"well"

by: animacionesalpedo

date: August 4, 2009

I dont know, I didnt like it that much, here´s why.
1- If u r using flash, you could make transparency effects and shit like that, in the beams for example.
2- It´s not explained why they are fighting
3- Mario fighting like in DBZ is already done and just remembering that one (SMBZ) I can´t avoid to compare them, so this one looks bad compared to the other one and we see it as if its worse than what it is...idk if that was clear LOL
4- The Fighting wasn´t planed, they just tryed to hit the other, and that gets boring
5- I´m no DBZ fan, but Goku overpowers Mario, with just a blast he would desintegrate Mario, so it doesn´t make sense...
6- Why is Goku in Mushroom Kingdom?
Then, the explanation of why i did not put you a 1 or other thing is,
1- It´s pretty noticeable that you will get really good if you practice.
2- Although the fighting was bad planed, the fight almost didn´t show any bad allignement.
3- I don´t like the music but its pretty good for this, it fits kinda ok
4- I love Mario related content so I kinda like this although i dont like DBZ
5- You have pretty good camera skills which can be improved a little bit.Like shaking and shit, more, and zooming in more too
6- It´s not short so it doesn´t leave the viewer with anxiety of watching more, that´s good, i have a problem with that mainly since my flashes often go too big in size and then i dont know how to compress them....
Well... if you practice A LOT, and i really mean it, practice makes perfection, never forget that.... make some intros to your flashes, explain things before the action starts, it´s very likely that you will become a great sprites animator...
pretty long review lol

Score: 6

"It's ok..."

by: Cursekyuubi

date: July 29, 2009

I give it a six mainly because there's alot of flashs with Mario doing DBZ stuff since SMBZ.It's good animation quality,it shows you have potential in flash and story would make it better.

Score: 10

"good"

by: novawolx

date: July 28, 2009

really its a good animation
nice fight