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Score: 6

"uuhhhh well not this again"

by: XxMercsxX

date: November 20, 2008

Epic fail
Dude, skating is hard, unless you are good with tweens. You have potential for Keyframe by Keyframe work like fast paced fights, or stick bashups.

Try a new genre and drop the whole skating thing.

Score: 10

"wow."

by: cino33

date: August 30, 2008

as i watch on ur videos they get better and better keep up the good work :)

Score: 8

"maybe good"

by: saspe

date: August 13, 2008

its a little fast a need some kind of soand of skate GOOD JOB

Score: 4

"Ease your tweens!"

by: Fagdoll

date: August 5, 2008

It was pretty good. Look up some tutorials on easing, this flash would be a lot better with easing. Never underestimate easing.

Score: 4

"Probably..."

by: TheFunDindongs

date: August 5, 2008

some more sound fx. Music was alright... um. But you could have made a sound of someone ollieing everytime he went in the air? Thats an ollie right? And eveytime he grinds a rail you could make some sound for that. www.flashkit.com is a good place for sound fx. Also animate it some more... add some more detail. Also sense you must be some what new at this... get somebody to help you. Like a collab, or just to help you with the detail and stuff. Just work on this and do some of the stuff I said to do. And it could look a little better. Thats all I got... peace

jt

Score: 3

"the kid on the seesaw"

by: TheBardOfBlasphemy

date: August 5, 2008

was the main highlight... one thing that you could improve is making the body look more real... make his knees flex more before he jumps and on the landings etc... I guess I had a problem with the physics... the motion of the rider wasn't at all believable.

Score: 6

"its okay, but.."

by: X3cutioner

date: August 5, 2008

your animation was a bit stiff, and quite repetitive.
keep trying you'll get there.

*Review Request Club*

Score: 6

"Good"

by: DeusExJuggernaut

date: August 5, 2008

I like the fact that you are making skate videos - I feel that they have not been done that much as, let's say, free runs. You have some nice ideas about the terrain and the obstacles, but I think you should try take it to the extreme and make your guy skate in/over buildings, cars and stuff like that. The music was well chosen and it suited a skating video. Try adding some sounds that you may hear from a skater - from example, sounds when you grind or when your board hits the ground - it will make things more dynamic. You should focus on improving your animation skill. I don't mind the skater being a stickman, but I think you should animate his limbs, make him look a bit more realistic. There are plenty of tutorials for such things our there, so if you take your time, I believe you will continue improving yourself. Good luck!