Score: 7
""Ok""
date: July 10, 2008
The game lacked a few key components. For instance, punctuation. The letters are full of bad writing and run on sentences. One, for example, finishes with "They're all around us, Mother of-"
This is just terrible. In the instance of writing a letter back home, you would not be in a combat situation. If you were and you were writing, you would be shot. Second off, there were implied relationships between the different characters, and no cinematics. No descriptions were given of the tasks at hand.
Things to add
-Better letters
-Cinematics
-Mute button
-Music selection (Aerosmith FTW)
-Unstandardization (More types of powerups, more enemies, assorted bosses)
-More bosses. Alot more. With more health and more attacks
-Steampunk that bitch out =D
-Involve different upgrades for the ships, and downgrades for enemies, all that good stuff
On the other hand, Kudos on the final boss. I enjoyed the cargo crate based attack instead of the standard lazorz. Id have both arms go at once, but then agian, i didnt make the game, so..
Overall, not bad, one of the better submissions in the portal.
Id like to see more games from you.
