Score: 8
"Well done work, to be sure..."
date: December 18, 2008
Let me first congratulate you, because you are the first flash artist I felt like I should comment on after coming on to Newgrounds for years. Granted, I am currently some faceless nobody from the Web, but I still feel like some validation is in order.
Now let's get back to the review. It had good comic timing, and the animation, though somewhat simple, was well done, particularly compared to some flash "art" I've seen on Newgrounds. Plus, the script ran smoothly and the audio was on par with the animation; it was good, if not simple. This is why it got an 8, becuase I'm weighing it for the flash itself, not it's content or rather what I feel like is it's "message."
That being said, I must say that I feel like this is very strongly liberal oriented with more of a way to make fun of conservatives as opposed to a strong argument about gun control. I see you are an intellagent person (I was about to say "man" but I dunno if you are a man or a woman, because this is the internet, after all), and in another comment on a different review, you made note that is is more than partisan argument. On that fact, I cannot agree with you more, but I still feel like this is just a extremist liberal slant on making fun of the extremist conservative viewpoint.
Now what I would think would be a good idea ( or perhaps just to balance your karma ), would be to make a sherry enema that pokes fun at the extremist liberal side of the argument. Now that's just a small suggestion, and you can run with it if you so wish.
So to conclude this review:
It's a well done, well executed animation. Though I cannot argue the quality of the work, I still feel like it's only half of the argument.
Well done, sir or madam. I look forward to more good cartoons from you.
