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Score: 9

"i see whats going on here...."

by: boregamer

date: October 4, 2009

i think i know whats going on... that "monk" royal guard dude told that guard who trains Luke and some other guard to kill Lukes parents so then hes forced to be a guard... imma watch the next =D

Score: 8

"Nice improvement"

by: mookal

date: October 4, 2009

I must say all the people who put this together has made a great improvement since the first one you submited. Keep up all the work. Hope to see chapter 4.

Score: 5

"on its way"

by: lordofudead

date: October 3, 2009

i know some animations worse this this have got better marks but...

you animation is very well done, the story has kinda been done to death unfortunatly.

the sound was bad and varied from time to time in quality. for a serious movie i almost laughed at your voice made sound effects for the hover bikes. your on your way. i think you have great potential but you should pick an original story.

my personal favourite animation on this website is XIN session 18. good story, fine sound quality, good animation. take some insperation from them

Score: 9

"Not bad"

by: cLeStA

date: October 1, 2009

Not Bad man a few more episodes and you can make it to the top and maybe to the best of the week if you keep at it a 9 for story

Score: 7

"Getting there"

by: Redcavalier1001

date: September 29, 2009

Not amazing, but it was good and I enjoyed it. You're starting and getting there. I'm lookin forward to the chapters to see how the story unravels. Keep up the great work! I definitely liked your fight scenes a lot, I think once you work on your animation skills some more they will be mind blowing!

Score: 3

"Way too typical and a little cheesy"

by: Sketchtech

date: May 21, 2009

I'm sorry but I think we've all heard this story before. The animation could probably use just a little bit more work also.

Score: 5

"Fable: The Lost Chapters(long review)"

by: TheSonicKid101

date: May 17, 2009

i'm really sorry, but hell this look just like that game(well in part one and 2)
first of, in fable the lost chapters, you are a boy who yes helps his dad and all that(same) and saw his parents die in front of his eyes(more same) and was taken in by the heroes' guild (more same but just the name is different) and then his first weapon given is a dam stick(EXADCTLY THE SAME)! and he has a friend he trains with till he grews up(same excepts its a girl and thats it) and all disctricts on this planet is seperated,AND heroes(royal guards) can have quests too.and the only different are is what happens AFTER the first part and there are buidlings, flying cars, a king, ect.

and one more thing, this is very confusing, you're buildings, cafeteria, elevators, even the dam food are like regular today, but your weapons and armor are dam swords and steel armor which is like 1400s? and then the dam flying cars which is like what time 2300????? you mixed dam time together and make it confusing, and ok, yes the fighting is a bit good, but could be better, i mean look up Sonic:Nazo Unleashed, the fighting in that is wayyy much better and yet he has less ratings than your stupid thing

Score: 10

"Not even going to watch it all!"

by: Curtizio

date: December 3, 2008

I ain't even going to watch this all. Morgan blew me away with the first 30 seconds of music. Way to steal Final Fantasy lol. Then orchastra... Then... Maybe i'll listen to it all when you post it in the audio portal their buddy lol... Nice sharpened and cleaned up graphics... That's what I am talking about.

Score: 10

"A nice story with excellent graphics and animation"

by: Mexifry

date: September 29, 2008

As corny as the story was, as a whole, I enjoyed it.

The art and animation makes me jealous. I want THOSE SKILLS! lol

Anyways, I'm definitely going to watch the rest of these and awiting the nest one! :D

~Mexifry895~

Score: 10

"Great"

by: Tourettes178

date: July 14, 2008

All of your work shows great promise