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Score: 5

"Good drawing..."

by: TwentySix26

date: May 14, 2008

You have some talent, and i really liked the unpolished style...

Good things:
. the drawing
. the ambient sounds of the water

Couple things i would change:
. Come up with a story- give me a reason to watch, keep watching and want to watch future movies by you.
. If you dont come up with a story- you had better be showcasing some REALLY badass art.
. Make more realistic sound effects or add music- when the tiger pounces into the water, the splash doesnt really reflect a realistic sound. and what was that sound when the moths comes into view? i thought it was going to be music, but it was really choppy.

-26

Score: 7

"Nice"

by: mariomaster123

date: May 14, 2008

Good job man, but ya need to work on it some :P\
Add some color and make it longer, but that's it! Great Animation and sound choice, keep it up!!!

Score: 5

"well...."

by: geacu

date: May 14, 2008

the sabertooth wuz kinda cute(cuz i luv animals)but other wise...it sukd and it wuz way too short

Score: 5

"nice"

by: Pampman

date: May 14, 2008

for practice not bad. but nothing special, too.
i'm looking forward to part 2

Score: 7

"Short, but well done"

by: ChainChompC

date: May 14, 2008

I've always been fond of this form of animation, but it was very short.