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Score: 5

"Uh..yeah..about this.."

by: MoreorLess

date: June 26, 2008

I know it takes alot of work to make claymations however this really needs work.

Here are some main things: The sound recording was bad, you couldn't hear anything all to well. And even the things you could hear were done with bad voice acting. One kid was sniffling the whole time, people stuttered, paused, and interrupted eachother. The combination of the bad sound and voice acting made it pretty hard to listen to. As to the visual aspects of the film, it looks as if you need a new camera. The lighting could also be better. I can tell there was some sort of plot to this, but it is hard to make out with all the things that went wrong. Bottom line is it needs work. After watching some of the other episodes I would say that for the rest of the series as well.

I could tell you tried. And maybe you were just doing it for fun. But honestly unless alot of improvement goes into it it is not worth viewing.

Score: 7

"Great but"

by: mattuiop

date: May 5, 2008

a good story line but you can't see whats going on, the frame rate is slow and the images were flashy!

Score: 9

"Great job on this!"

by: killslasher

date: May 5, 2008

Really,you did good.
Unlike most claymations,they try to be funny,by being random.
Which,well,isnt funny at all.
Knox doesnt do that,just saying,also,you didnt do that either.
It had a pretty decent storyline actually to me.
It made sense,a lot of sense.
then,you just needed a bit more video quality.
Didnt really like the camera. :(

But still,very great job,looking for the third part.

Score: 7

"ummmm"

by: bigmac990

date: May 5, 2008

i thought it was quite good actually, and the other guys are just being idiots. they probably dont realise what goes into making a flash. they think it takes like 2 minuits. it TAKES TIME TO MAKE CLAY ANIMATIONS!! jesus. it was kinda like knox's though. down to the clay modles but still, good effort!

Score: 0

"grrrr"

by: narudude1996

date: May 4, 2008

This is as sucky parody of knox korner. nice try tryin to sound like knox but no go. sorry.

Score: 5

"nice but messy sound"

by: godlessinfidel

date: May 4, 2008

nice, but be careful with the sound. the recording is messy as.

Score: 1

"hate"

by: bocaj154

date: May 4, 2008

this movie makes no sence

Score: 0

"...."

by: Risky2004

date: May 4, 2008

i hate clay

Score: 6

"ha ha"

by: MetalThor

date: May 4, 2008

wow