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Score: 9

"Very good I thought"

by: JohnyChimpo

date: February 24, 2009

First of all, I love that song. Second, I really like your animation style and how you just let the story evolve on its own.
It's nice to go back and watch after almost a year haha

Score: 9

"It's really good"

by: M-Y

date: July 2, 2008

I absolutely like this animation, it's just too good.

Score: 9

"A fine flash"

by: dudeskinn

date: May 26, 2008

I don't know about these others, but I get it. The storyline is plain to see, you just didn't spoon feed it to the audience. I like the way it was told, the scenes are like remembering a dream, linked but surreal. Very dream like. The music and video complement each other well.

Score: 3

"Well..."

by: SmileXXI

date: May 20, 2008

I understand this is your first flash video and I admire that, believe me, I've seen worse.... but, I had no idea of what was goin' on. There was no story at all and that's not the problem, because you can make a fun flash outta nothing with no story... buth this one makes you believe there's one.
Try to work out your character's facial expressions, that would make a big difference.
I'm sure you can make better than this ;)

Score: 10

"cool"

by: newgroundsbiggestfan

date: May 8, 2008

it was pretty cool the girl was pretty

Score: 7

"it was pretty good"

by: beastkid7

date: May 7, 2008

I just had no idea what the heck was going on

Score: 8

"okay"

by: Fonzy360

date: May 6, 2008

was pretty good

Score: 6

"What was the plot?"

by: WeirdJedi

date: May 6, 2008

I really didn't like watching this clip. It was a bit too random. From my perspective, it looked like you were trying to have a more serious tone with your flash, but you definitely needed to know where you are going with this. Randomness usually does not make a serious clip.

I really liked your environmental drawings. The problem actually came when you introduced the characters. I... did not like... your characters. It must have been that block style. It just didn't seem to fit with the rest of the story... oh wait, there wasn't one?

I give you props on what you did in the flash, but I just wished there was a little more focus on some of its elements.

Score: 9

"simple kind but good atmosphere"

by: iGoem

date: May 6, 2008

as the summary ;)

Score: 5

"i didnt get it"

by: sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet

date: May 6, 2008

wat was so good it was just a bunch of wierd bells