Score: 6
"Fairly fun"
date: May 1, 2008
Tom looked fairly cute.
You should've had some moving mouths - it didn't really seem like the wee boy was dissing MTC - more like someone else had said that line and he had stepped on-camera.
The words at the start were kinda hard to understand.
I liked the ending.
To me it seems like you could've fitted in a few visual jokes, with Pico/MTC downing beer/shots before Pico collapses. Might have helped with the flow, too.
Cool vibes though.
May 1, 2008
Author's Response:
Big thanks. Ya, I think from now on if I don't have time to add somethin' I'll be bittin' the bullet and get-her-done on a later date. Till then I'll also see if I can reorganize my schedule so I have more time to work.