Score: 3
"Nice poem."
date: April 25, 2008
It definitely liked it a bit. It was nice from beginning to end to read. Though I won't say anything as not to spoiling the reading, but the stuff in it was nice to read.
Although the text of it was a bit hard to read. You might to see about using a much darker color on the words if your going to use that kinda of background. I had to squit a bit sometimes to read some of the stuff.
I could see you were trying to portray some kind of sense of death, but you might want to watch out for using so much gray though since it was interfering with seeing the text a bit. You should see about adding more to the background so as to make it more interesting to look at while reading the text as it was a bit sleep inducing a little.
If your going to do more of these you might want to also put in some of kind scene changer button so it easier to also be able to read all the stuff. I had to repeat the flash a few times to read all the text of it, because it was going a bit fast.
Nice choice for a music though it fit well with the poem.
Was nice to read, though. It be would nice to have some poem reading going in Newgrounds, would be different to see then usual stuff. Just work to make looking at the background little more pleasing to see as to help build up the power of the poems.
April 25, 2008
Author's Response:
Thank you, and beleave me your advise has been heard. This was a test to see if a scene changer was needed, and I supose it is. I will deff make one for the future :)