Score: 7
"very well laid out and scripted (almost)"
date: April 23, 2008
well laid out, Amazing sweet montage intro and leadup to the main evnt.
the main event itself is somewhat lacking and falls a bit flat. It seems almost as if he ran out of inspiration which is a pity, because I feel if this guy remains fully inspired he would be fucking AWESOME!
as it is, you feel a little down, because you see hints of how good he can be.
so far, ALMOST.
bookmark this author and check back often, no doubt his future efforts will be stellar!
April 23, 2008
Author's Response:
Actually there was no script! :O
But thank you your a fine gent