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Score: 9

"Very original and creative! 5/5"

by: tomiko

date: May 1, 2008

-Its good to see that animation is alot more than just some tweening in flash.
-Artwork was excellent as usual, always a new style, so every animation is a suprise =D.
-Sound fits perfect: did you first got the idea then the song, or first the song and then got the idea?
-The action was sometimes hard to follow. But on the other hand that increased the effect. (You forgot to draw the door once.)
-Maybe you should use more colours; I know thats going to be very hard but I think its worth a try.
-Last thing; when i was watching the animation my father entered the room and he was INTERESTED: that means awesome job cause my dad thinks animations are for little kids XD.

Score: 9

"nice"

by: cami-kitee

date: April 30, 2008

a lot of work put into that and some very cool music.

Score: 10

"gets a 10 from me"

by: cottee99best

date: April 28, 2008

ne1 that does animation on paper frame by frame gets a 10/10 from me. nice work.

Score: 9

"Loved it."

by: Archii

date: April 28, 2008

Was very well put together.
Kind of short (9)
Good animation, choice of song, artist skill.
Love to see more like this~

Score: 7

"very good, too choppy"

by: KAG8893

date: April 27, 2008

it was very choppy, but other than that it was really good...

Score: 8

"very good."

by: james4562000

date: April 27, 2008

its animated very well, but its kinda short, and it doesnt have a real plot.
you dont see a lot of this kind of animation so i encourage you to keep it up. nice audio btw!

Score: 10

"Nice"

by: SkeezyForHeezy

date: April 27, 2008

Not a lot to say about this. Simply that I love your art style, and the song was neat. Good job and I hope to see more from you in the near future.

Score: 9

"The blood and sweat!!!"

by: tovopro

date: April 27, 2008

Very impressive for student work! 2D Cel animation is a dying art in America now a days. Too bad, cuz all that CGI 3D stuff is just getting to redundant. I know this isn't an actual cel animation, but a pencil test instead. However, alot of folks (or the average eye) always soon forgets the amount of blood and sweat it takes to create this kind of animation. It's not just a simple move the rigged skeleton from point A to point B, but every single frame needs to be individually drawn. It's been awhile since I've taken 2D animation class, but I think it was 30 frames a second. That's 30 seperate drawings per second. Do the math from there.

GOOD JOB MAN!!!

Score: 9

"sweet"

by: ZztweekzZ

date: April 27, 2008

the only thing bad about it at all was the music.
it reminded me of my frined thomas who is really bad at singing

Score: 5

"My other one was too short."

by: Bonkwee

date: April 27, 2008

Way too jumpy for my taste. The art was good, but nothing new or spectacular to me. I would recommend a different way of doing animation if you're gonna stick with shorts for newgrounds.