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i found it, whats the word .... unique. you really need a female voice and maybe even a scene without the word fuck. You could poissbley cut down on the cussing aswell since it is only once or twice not every scene

April 29, 2008

Author's Response:

haha i like the word 'unique'. I will try to make more content that follow that same word. The female voice part has been spoken of a few times, so it looks like deffinite point to do somethin on.

Oh and the profanity, yes probably true, but sorry its just gonna get worse and worse, but maybe I can do something that might work.

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Score: 2

"2/10"

by: dungeons0

date: April 20, 2008

Humor was lame, Voices were all the same, Voice was differed to subtitles, the storyline was...sad and the Armor suit guys were constantly moving.
2 For Effort, Sorry

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Score: 1

"what??"

by: BMack24

date: April 20, 2008

this was... painful. i couldn't even watch the whole thing. the animation was bad and the writing was just terrible. besides just not making a lick of sense overall, i couldn't tell at first if it was trying to be funny or serious. it seems in lieu of actual jokes, you just throw in a lot of unnecessary cussing. though there was the 'hardon' comment, which i'm pretty sure you ganked from tankmen. cursing can be funny if done right (see metal gear awesome...) but it just wasn't here. work on the writing next time, seriously. god-awful.

April 29, 2008

Author's Response:

Yes funny and serious was part of idea when I did it. But yes, you got a point. I'll consider it in the future. Oh and jokes, yes probably I should do some proper jokes. The focus on this 'project' was for a rough idea of a storyline and somehow making each scene somewhat related to the next. Jokes I really didnt focus on, but in the next one Ill see if I can think of a few clever things. I admit I didnt bother trying anything with the intentions to make anyone laugh.

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Score: 10

"Great Ninja Humour!"

by: GreenEyedNinja

date: April 20, 2008

I almost fell out of my chair... I thought it was serious at first, but it became stupid quickly. Great use of cussing.

April 29, 2008

Author's Response:

im glad the execution of the intro that transitioned to the main story worked through you off. That was what I planned when I started it. But yeah, thanks again for the tips from the message you sent me. Im trying to use some of those tricks in my newest creation, which im taking much more time into it.

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Score: 0

"I can't see the movie"

by: ZanoDyami

date: April 20, 2008

The preloader doesn't work, and I've waiting for it to load for five minutes. Please fix it.

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Score: 3

"it could be better"

by: flamboyant2456

date: April 20, 2008

the animation could be better. It was okay but needs a different voice for the different guys.

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