Score: 7
"It wasn't as good as everyone says"
date: April 16, 2008
The animation was really nice, I didn't really like the humor but that's probably because I am not into this random and parody kind of humor. The art was rather simple, it was suiting the situation most of the times but almost all of the backgrounds were bad looking, the gradient ones especially. I guess you re-used them from your older flashes, I can't tell though. I like the story behind this flash, it actually follows one throughout the series unlike a lot of other animations on newgrounds.
I don't really understand why everyone is giving it 10/10, a review score of 9.9 is pretty much ridicules, even for a submission of this quality. The drawing of the truck driver was good and it proved that you can do by far better than the simple shaped cripple boy and chocolate man. Maybe you should think about redesigning them a little to make them more interesting.
The voice actors, egoraptor mostly, were pretty good. I am not exactly sure why, but it sometimes sounded like there was no emotion in the voice at all but that might just have been part of the humor, I don't know.
The timing on this cartoon (first and second part) is pretty good, the 180° turn when chocolate man is standing in front of the hostel is well made, too but after that it seemed like you got a little lazy again and kept the animation style of the first part.
All in all it has lots of good parts but also bad points here and there.