Score: 5
"Ross deserves some tributes..."
date: May 4, 2008
Nicely drawn logo and cool voice at the start.
My first gripe is with the buttons in the menu - you didn't change the graphics for the 'rollover' frame so it isn't as obvious as it could be what's a button and what's being selected.
iShirm's part was nicely drawn (although the animation was fairly minimalistic).
Doesn't seem very pleasant a 'tribute' though and as a tongue-in-cheek joke, it didn't actually make me laugh.
In your part, things could have generally been drawn better - specially the crumpled up paper.
I guess the end frame is meant to be charming in ist's simplicity/primitiveness? I think the two sides could have been clearer - are they meant to be cliffs?Mountains? and some of the lines you have could have maybe been omitted for a cleaner look.
I liked the jolly tune and colours though and the font reminds me of a holiday postcard.
It's a cool tribute and would certainly make me smile if it were dedicated to me.
I felt a bit underwhelmed by this though - might be the length or the lack of real humour or other substance (to my mind).
May 4, 2008
Author's Response:
I didn't see the need to have a rollover frame, since there is a change of cursor for when you hover over a button anyway. iShirms part could have had more animation and blah yeah but I had no control over that.
One thing that bugs me is, you saying I could have "drawn better", no I couldn't, if I could have drawn better I would have drawn better. Belive me, I drew what I could, look at my eariler flash and you'll see that I've actually done a little better with my drawing here, so I find that comment quite rude.
As for the end loop to my part, that was just suppost to be silly and everything, didn't hostly put a whole lot of effort into making it, so yeah, the sides where ment to be buildings, Yahoo having more to represent a bigger company.