Score: 6
"Constructive Tips"
date: March 31, 2008
This Flash had a lot of build up and you could have taken it to a different place. The thing is though with all that build up past the Third repetition of Wade going to his computer the anticipation and build up started to fizzle down...then after a while of it petering downward it started to build up again....but then it fizzled a second time. I would make the Flash a bit more to the point to increase responsiveness. At the very end of the Flash
I thought it was funny how he kicked Strawberry Clock in the face and shattered the clock. "Ow...what the hell was that for" Funny.
6/10 (had potential if you would have been a bit more to the point and capitalize on viewer anticipation)
5/5 All-inAll = Decent Flash . take care