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Score: 7

"good work for second game"

by: numberone111

date: March 24, 2008

This is good, for your second time. I will just state the obviuos, need better graphics, need better transitions, need a little more practice. Other than that, if you keep practicing, this concept can go a long way. good luck to you.

Score: 0

"dammit!"

by: god-dammit

date: March 24, 2008

theres no way to win!!!

Score: 3

"it was alright"

by: 2moonsbeast

date: March 24, 2008

the game was cool, should could have been longerand the last part sucked

Score: 6

"6/10"

by: MegiPoland

date: March 24, 2008

The next will be better?

Score: 5

"Meh.."

by: Foldz

date: March 24, 2008

I have seen better graphics. The concept is ok...

Score: 4

"Glitchy."

by: Ruzhyo

date: March 24, 2008

It's glitchy, and the grammar seems a little off. Not to mention the whole stick figure thing of course. It's good to see someone at least trying to utilize actionscript in their work but it just needs a little polish. Here are the glitches I noticed:
1. When I picked the lock, instead of going out I turned around to watch the TV ect, when I came back the lock wasn't picked. I had to pick it again, no big deal, but it's a continuity thing.
2. Also, when I went to go watch TV in glitch one, I went and picked up the clothes as well. When I came back to the lock, and picked it again, it told me I needed to go get the clothes. So I turned around and they were still on the bed. Again, just a continuity thing.
3. I cannot get past the end of the game. When I click 'do battle' it goes back to the part where I shot the second guard and then it goes back to the part that says "this is the last part" and when I click run it just says you were caught.

Also, if that really was the end, then it couldn't hurt to make it a tad longer.

Score: 2

"Serious Bugs"

by: SteamTusk

date: March 24, 2008

You should really play test these kinds of things better, it was almost impossible to escape the cell because the game kept forgetting I had camoflauge clothes. Then when I turned around to get them, I turned back and the lock had reset itself, almost as by magic; either that or a variable that's not being written to.

After unlocking the cell a half dozen times, I called it quits. Not fun, test MOAR.

Score: 5

"I liked it."

by: trekopep

date: March 24, 2008

I tend to like games like this. This was ok, though there are quite a few things you could improve on.

1. First of all, the part where you get the camoflage clothes was a little weird. I think you should change the code so that you don't have to click on the arrow again to get the clothes, then go back. I go those clothes about five times before it worked.

2. Secondly, You should improve the graphics. Don't get me wrong, I have nothing against stick figures, but perhaps if the stick figures were more professionally drawn.

3. Take codes off of objects once you're done with them. Like the part where you make that thing fall on the guard's head, if you click on it again later, it will go back to the animation of it falling on his head.

Add music, sound effects, better graphics, longer gameplay, and you've got it made. This was fun. Don't stop, UltimateFang. XD

Score: 5

"um, i think its broke"

by: sharpmanexe

date: March 24, 2008

Goomba: Hey, have you heard about that Mario guy?
Koopa: Him? You mean?
Goomba: Yea, the one with the mushrooms
Koopa: Yea!
Goomba: You know, the one jumping around in the forest
Koopa: Yea, yea, I know him, I know him
Goomba: Yes? Okay, hey check it out!

Super Mario RPG
It is the only one just for me
When I play the game, I get lost in a phase
Then I find out I'm stuck in Geno's Maze

Mario: Gimme Frog Coins!
Bowser: Gimme Mario!
Mario: Gimme Frog Coins!
Bowser: Gimme Mallow!
Mario: Gimme See Ya!
Bowser: Gimme Geno!
Mario: Gimme Cookies!

Magikoopa: Of course, we will get you that Mario

Bowser: We need to mute that stupid voice
Mario: I need to get those damn frog coins

There are many secrets in this game!
Many of which drive some peeps insane!
Why we try to cheat in a really good game?
Just sounds like crap and it makes you look lame!

Exiting the forest is super simple:
All you do is follow these path turns
For the rest of your gaming life

Speaker: Gimme Star Eye, gimme Cookies, gimme See Ya,
gimme Great Guy's Casino gimme everything i need

Mario: Wait, wait, wait, who are you?

Exor: Hahahahaha.

Exor's Verse:
My name is Exor, I'm the rappers angel
Travelling Blade with the Axem Rangers
Why should lamers like Mario with his Party of
A bunch of retarded Joes
Fix a Star Road, I don't think so
(Geno: Geno Whirl!) I don't blink slow (Geno: Let's do this!)
Cause every time I drive and rhyme a rhyme I
damage my right eye more than nine times ninety nine

Mario's Verse:
Lately's been a boredom and lack of interest
Little cats call us fags and incestous
Italian guy, gotta buy some time to blast right past
Rescue the captive princesses
Koopas and Gombas, them I just laugh at
I'ma hit "A" to raise the level of attacks
Don't fight the poverty, but hey! Kids that are lonely can
drop it and play my game to get their bodies to act glad

Dialogue 1:
Speaker: Gimme
Croco: My name is Croco
Speaker: Gimme, gimme
Croco: Wallet
Speaker: Gimme
Croco: Wallet
Speaker: Gimme, gimme
Croco: In the end of the game
Speaker: Gimme
Croco: Items
Speaker: Gimme, gimme
Croco: Something rare

Dialogue 2:
Great Guy: Oh, hello!
Mario: Oh, it's a little creepy up here
Great Guy: Yea, it is
Mario: I'm a little low on hit points
Great Guy: Okay?
Mario: You have any refreshments?
Great Guy: Yea, you can take this mushroom
Mario: BUT IT'S ROTTEN!!

Princess Toadstools Verse:
I am just a princess, please help me!
Booster is scary.
I've heard rumours he's taking me to Marrymore
but I don't wanna marry more I wanna marry Mario

Mario: Gimme Frog Coins!
Bowser: Gimme Mario!
Mario: Gimme Frog Coins!
Bowser: Gimme Mallow!
Mario: Gimme SeeYa!
Bowser: Gimme Geno!

Princess Toadstool: Gimme my frying pan and parasol

There are many secrets in this game!
Many of which drive some peeps insane!
Why we try to cheat in a really good game?
Just sounds like crap and it makes you look lame!

Exiting the forest is super simple:
All you do is follow these path turns
For the rest of your gaming life.

I'M-A-GAMING-GOD

Score: 4

"Lacking sound"

by: PURELYMAD99

date: March 24, 2008

Good general idea, but no sound/music. Also work on the graphics if you can.