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Score: 10

"Excellent"

by: Kangman

date: March 30, 2008

There really wasn't a story but the humor and the idea was great.
There really weren't any animation but the story and the humor kept me from just turning it a off, Bravo!

Score: 7

"it was okay"

by: eb0nydshea

date: March 30, 2008

if it would have been portrayed differently, i think it would have gotten a 10

Score: 7

"hmmm"

by: jasoneastman

date: March 30, 2008

i agree with the guy who gave it a 7

Score: 9

"brilliant"

by: X3cutioner

date: March 30, 2008

i loved it, is there more to come?

Score: 10

"Nice"

by: hakkai999

date: March 30, 2008

It made me laugh hahaha... It was a true to life concept. ^_^

Score: 7

"Okay"

by: et-cetera

date: March 30, 2008

First off, I'd like to say that this was a magnificent idea. I would have never come up with it personally. However the delivery was a bit off. It was generally very bland, with no real changes. If touched up a tiny bit more, with some more sounds (as hinted below) and some other things like that, this would definitely earn a 10 from me.

Score: 10

"Very excellent"

by: Damionstjames

date: March 30, 2008

I love it. Ingenious really

Score: 10

"HAHAHA"

by: korpsvissage

date: March 30, 2008

wow that was great loved the ending lol

Score: 6

"Eh...?"

by: gamergod2O

date: March 30, 2008

Ok first off I love people reviewing this, "Graphics weren't executed professionally" You know what? Go make fun of the stick figure animation bull that plagues the portal god...

Anyways I really liked the graphics, it was a nice change from the usual sprites or drawings. I think it was "executed" quite nicely. Oh and refering to that guy again, NEWGROUNDS HAS ENOUGH FLASH stop talking like Newground is ONLY flash, it's called NEWgrounds not FLASHgrounds.

The animation I thought was realistic. It fooled me at first to think it was real.

You originality just amazes me. First off it's not that original, just the typical stereotype of a guy and a girl. What's next a Mario Parody? No please don't listen to me...not another...

Eh...? What was I saying? Oh yes, the style I must say is a bit bland, I've seen it before (not as much as Mario *cough*) and it's starting to get a liiiittle tiring.

How come I only see 5's and 10's? Forget that I'm giving this a 6, just to piss you all off. No not just because that, because I really remotely liked this flash. I'll have to look into more of your stuff. As for now though this is going in to the, "I watched it, what else do you want from me?" File.

Score: 6

"Idea good... just needs more"

by: baronheron

date: March 30, 2008

You could improve this a great deal by putting the right sounds in, for the... initial coupling have the sound of the door being slamed open and feverish kissing sounds, the door swings open <bam> "oops the door" [new image] "oh ya" etc. the pictures tell the story but it needs a little better of a hook.

Again this was a great idea just dont settal for less than the best!!