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Score: 9

"Good good all good"

by: ToastMasterM

date: March 18, 2008

Work on your FX and put some more content in there, otherwise it was pretty solid, and I liked the art style a lot! You would make a great MAD artist, you know that?

Score: 8

"The animation was the only funny thing about it"

by: eVo121

date: March 18, 2008

I hate to say this, since youve put so much into it, but the overall flash is just boring and slow with not much of a real reward for all the delay. Even though, the animation is fantastic, in a humorously gross kind of way, which was, to me, the only really funny thing about it. regardless it was still a good effort and for that you get an 8. w00t. congrats on front page.

Score: 6

"...eh"

by: neighborofbeast667

date: March 18, 2008

not bad, but ive seen better. personally i think batman hates hi theme was better

Score: 5

"hmmm"

by: UnimportantThingy

date: March 18, 2008

i didn't really get it... but it was... interesting.

Score: 8

"Lot of flash cheats"

by: ace-cartoons

date: March 18, 2008

Lot of flash cheats, but this was really good. Art was pretty good (most of the time) But I wish you put more detail in things like the salt (the motion/the actual animation) The sandwich could have been drawn better too. But this is still good. Hope you don't mind creative critism!

Score: 3

"can only be described as ..."

by: swords91

date: March 18, 2008

boring
however the animation was good

Score: 6

"meh"

by: Drift12

date: March 18, 2008

the ending blew

Score: 4

"WHY/WHAT!?"

by: turma13

date: March 18, 2008

umm...hmmm...this flash has no direction or coherent plot....and some flashes (badgers, melons, banana phone, magical trevor, dbz in a nutshell..etc.) can get away with that, but thsi one cannot, because it is not funny nor is it catchy. This is a miss, good luck for next time.

Score: 5

"This doesn't deserve frontpage"

by: Namir

date: March 18, 2008

It's not like it's unoriginal, but it's not the best. It was boring and gross. Gross in a bad way.

Score: 6

"Not too bad."

by: ReillyReilly

date: March 18, 2008

The animation was alot of tween and not very well done overall. The humor wasn't too great, but tthe detail in the still shots and some of the tween shots was fantastic! It looks like you are tyring to animate with a mouse, which is always tough. Keep them coming and dont give up. Overall it wasn't too bad, clean and lighthearted.