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Score: 10

"dude"

by: pillbot3

date: July 2, 2008

val lights up so much that if you put him in a paper and lit it u wud get high

and also i particularly liked "lots of money to buy us lots of stuff"

keep high

Score: 6

"Nice Short"

by: Jacklus

date: June 14, 2008

I guess I haven't been on Newgrounds so much lately, but I didn't like this one as much as the others. Some tips for the Camera Angles, when Looking at the side of a perosn, their mouth should be open on which ever direction they are looking at. It's hard to explain sort of like '< if you can understand that smiley. Also when he got hit with the cannon and fell down, he looked a little flat. Don't know if that was intentional but it could of looked better.

Score: 7

"Nice tidbit"

by: LenardNotLenny

date: April 10, 2008

I think it would look better if you tried animating with the outlines being a darker shade of the body color. I would make your drawings look better. You could also just take more time on the graphics in general. But the animation was flawless, so nice work. It was pretty funny...

Score: 6

"That was pretty fun"

by: BritishMoose

date: February 26, 2008

Nice timing with the whole thing. It was sorta entertaining in an odd way - probably 'cause I know you through the forums.

I'd recommend trying to brighten everything up. All the gray colours were pretty...pretty bland. Also, the black lines were quite oppressive (especially in the background - they made the characters blend in with them). If I were you, my next step would be to try and liven up the colours and experiment with different coloured lines.

Keep it up.

Score: 3

"work harder"

by: slanted2

date: February 25, 2008

the drawings were ok but they could be much better the whole thing looks like you got a little lazy with the animation like the running for example, if your gonna use a movie clip do it right.

Score: 2

"right"

by: starspawn

date: February 25, 2008

2 for effort. animation isnt very good and to be honest it seems like your thinking your cool because you know about weed.

Score: 6

"not bad"

by: TheManOfH

date: February 25, 2008

first review!!

YAY.

it could of been funnier though.