Score: 7
"A few points..."
date: February 14, 2008
About the whole thing - it bears very little relevance to the song Snow, so why say it's a music video, why not just call it random imagery or something similar. The other main point I'm going to have to pull you up on is how you cut the song when it's not done. Music videos don't do that, so we're back to the original point of why call it Snow (Hey Oh)?
The animation was good (aside from the guy throwing up, that went on way too long) and you've got a good style. All you really need to do is find a decent script for a song and you're onto a winner.
I'd like to see more of your works, but the one thing about your animation style that I dislike is the thick black lines surrounding your drawings - make them thinner, as it makes the whole animation look smoother and there's a good incentive for you to get towards a featured movie.
[Review Request Club]
February 14, 2008
Author's Response:
well its a video that has music in it wihtout any like script or non music parts, so that makes it a music video no? also im not going to animate a 5 minute song, cutting it is a simple solution for not having to animate 5 minutes bro. and the name Snow was taken, so I used the full name of the song Snow (Hey Oh); thats what the song is called.
so yeah, stop reviewing things cuz it seems like your writing for the sake of writing... you dont know shit...