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Score: 3

"aaaaahhhh!!!"

by: kibe09

date: May 1, 2008

omg its a gay blimp. hurray!!!

Score: 10

"guess its a little late"

by: DaGrahamCraka

date: April 23, 2008

to be reaping those 5 points and that e cookie. but the scratch is sampled from rose

:D

Score: 7

"Good vibrations."

by: Bezman

date: April 20, 2008

That was pretty cool.

Simple plot, but nice vibes. Also, the graphics for the smiling blimps and the end song pretty much make it.

The graphics near the start leave something to be desired. The words could have been better decorated - maybe having 3d-style block letters or something for 'love' etc and more angular letters for 'war' etc.

The bomb could have used some shading and the frame for when the green blimp drops his cigar could have been better.

Also, the blurry rainbow doesn't fit in brilliantly with the crisp vectors in my opinion.

Your smiling faces rock though, the hearts-as-smoketrails are awesome and the song is brilliant.

Makes me smile, despite slight graphical issues.

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Score: 7

"Cheerful and bright."

by: Dead-Body-Man

date: February 26, 2008

~!Good Points!~
-Cheerful, and very happy. Made my day.
- Funny.
-It was pretty good concerning graphics.

~?Improvements?~
- The drawing could be a little better.
- my computer started running slower during the "evil" blimp part. I think I kicked it on accident. ;)

Score: 8

"Great V-Day Movie"

by: Shanus

date: February 23, 2008

Awesome movie, with lots of cheer of the day it represents.

Graphically not the greatest but still a fun movie to watch, seemed to me to be quite like an e-card more than a movie, but the contrast between the two sections was quite funny. Maybe a little improvement on the drawing side wouldbe good. I also noticed that when there are loads of the "evil" plimps, my computer seemed to slow down, I think too many copies were ther, just tone that down a bit.

The audio was good though, nice selection. A funny story & overal a very nice flash, good job :D

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Score: 9

"It was cute ^.^"

by: VhsTapeclock

date: February 23, 2008

I liked it, it made me smile!

Score: 7

"Okay"

by: Little-Rena

date: February 22, 2008

It didn't really have too much going on and the animation wasn't all that adventurous to start with. The menu was okay, simple and easy to use, the graphics where pretty decent too although there could have been more maybe clouds or something. Some explosion effects too, the movement of the blimps was pretty good though.

The music was good, and the sound, but I just couldn't really see the text fitting in all that well. It did work as showing what it was about but maybe it could have been done a little diffrent, not sure how. The movement of the blimps was slow but I would expect that, so that's okay. On a whole, it was kind of short and didn't have too much happening, expanding would have been nice.

3/5

<3

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Score: 8

"\m/"

by: Haggard

date: February 22, 2008

The phrase "Make Love Not War" squeezed into a tiny little flash... and it turns out pretty well!

Even though the flash is quite short and the graphics are a bit sloppy I like this flash. The message is transported simple and well.

You chose the music very well, as every piece suits the scene it is used in.

But you should try to improve you graphics. As I've already written, they seem to be kind of sloppy. Maybe using a smaller tool can help you here. And sometimes one has to draw a line serveral times before it is perfect ;) . This is of course hard work, but I think at the end of the day it will pay off and resulting in a higher score.

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Score: 10

"nice"

by: Dj-Immune

date: February 20, 2008

My day has just been made =D

xD

Score: 8

"Didn't need those capital letters. :p"

by: NintendoMadness

date: February 20, 2008

- Good stuff -
Well blimps are very under-used in flashes so another star for originality. Very good for your first animation becase it had all the things a decent flash needed. Good music that suits it and all the right colourse being used, also it some unusual humourism to it. The rainbow was pretty cute and it made it all up for me. <3

- Bad stuff and improvments -
It was a bit short and could of done with a bit more of a story line because it felt a bit limited in that department. You could add more of a story with it by:
Having some bad realationship with the blimps and then something came along to brighten up their day.
Like this flash did with me.

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