Score: 6
"Commentaries are Meant to be Optional"
date: November 13, 2009
Now, the animation and premise are okay during Acts I & II--the imagined success and the real failure and injury--but Act III's rambling commentary detracted from the experience because it was poorly done... both deliberately and performed poorly in general (poor performance at being poor... there is such a thing). It prevented me from clicking replay.
To all authors: if you think a Commentary would be cool to add, either you don't or allow it as an optional audio track (even if it is supposed to suck).