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Score: 7

"Animation is choppy"

by: Admiral8Q

date: September 8, 2008

The storyline is pretty bland, but the humour makes up for what is lacking. Animation is choppy, but I've seen them get better in other Haizeel Hashnan flash movies. The ships in the sky all look like keyholes, more variety should have been used. I did notice that they actually move a little, well done! The voice acting is above adequate and fits all the characters. The music really sucks for the setting though. Some futuristic techno or something a lot faster should have been used, for the fight scenes. Slow "Classical" was not a good choice.

Keep improving! You're on my fav list Haizeel! I look forward to all your work!

Score: 10

"Okay but not great"

by: Reandom

date: February 8, 2008

The animations choppy, but i want to see more. I assume all you need is more flash practice. I really liked it and i hope you make more better ones

Score: 8

"good!"

by: Peettheman

date: January 15, 2008

honestly, a little long i thought... but good storyline and good drawings! The sound was a little off and the actual animation graphics weren't the best - maybe thats how you intended it... but overall great job!!!!

Score: 10

"Pretty good job!"

by: Comrade-K-rad

date: January 12, 2008

Only one problem, and it may have been my slow computer, but the sound brcame out of sinq with the animation as it continued other than that great job!

Score: 10

"Great"

by: CruzAzul-19

date: January 12, 2008

Wow this was a very well made flash. There is nothing you could possibly fix in this but my only suggestion would be to make the main characters voice a bit more meaningful by changing the tone of it as the situation gets worse because throughout the whole flash his tone was all the same. Still keep up the awsome work! :]

Score: 8

"nice job"

by: furion-racer22

date: January 12, 2008

Not bad in fact i think i liked it. This was an original idea and u get mad props for that one. More frame by frame like mentioned before in a previous review and i think that you have got something going there. So keep those ideas running.
Ciao mate.

Score: 8

"This was nice"

by: ddieguez

date: January 12, 2008

This flash was really nice, but you really could better this with more frame-by-frame scenes (the fight scenes). Overall you get a 7/10. Nice job!

Score: 9

"Nice job"

by: nikedrummer33

date: January 12, 2008

I think you did a good job on this. Yeah, the audio is a bit off, nothing major. You can fix it for the next time. The animation was good overall although I do think you could have added some more frames in for the fight scenes to make it flow a bit better.

That aside I enjoyed it.

Score: 7

"Very nice, but-"

by: iLott

date: January 12, 2008

It was realy nice, the story, the animation stuff and so.. But, i think it could be better if you will make the animation faster ( and I dont mean by frames per seconds ) it will be lot better, and get a better microphone also.

Score: 7

"COuld be a lot better"

by: tchort6

date: January 12, 2008

Well you should really do something about the timing of your sounds... most of the sounds are always like 1/2secs to late. You should also make the fighting scenes better.