Score: 9
"Almost perfect"
date: January 4, 2008
When I watched it, I felt you had the mood down really good and your characters were looking really nice. The animation style was done pretty good, too.
What really took away from the movie for me though was two things. First one was the facial expressions didn't seem to match for me at times. Like when the guy was sitting in the branch with a nice little grin, then a tear fell. It felt like it just didn't match properly. I'd like to also suggest to try and maybe give em alittle more movement. Sorta like in the lake scene, the guy was walking towards the girl, but he just kinda went up and down. Maybe makin a ripple while he walks through would be a nice touch, too.
I think this was made really good and looks nice, just some details that need work.
January 4, 2008
Author's Response:
thanks for your advice! i`ll be sure to add more details into my next movies!
and the matching expressions...keep in mind that this is my first time drawing anime in flash ;P