Score: 6
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date: April 9, 2008
The idea is very good, but sadly it isn't very well executed. First of all the stick figure didn't have any kind of perspective. I know that something like this is very hard to draw, but it looked the whole time as if he was lying on the table, not like he was standing. Maybe it could help if you would film the table from the side, so that we can see a wall behind it. That way it would be much easier to draw a "standing" stick figure.
The blood didn't look very good either. You need some other colours and some shadings to make the red colour look like "real" blood. I think there are even some "blood tutorials" here on NG, you may want to check those out.
The music you chose for this submission fitted quite good into the flash, no complaints here ;) .
{ Review Request Club }
April 10, 2008
Author's Response:
Thanks for review :)