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Score: 8

"pump up the volume"

by: iamnoir

date: January 4, 2008

Your voices need to be louder or your music needs to be quieter but its hard to hear what they say

Score: 10

"I liked it"

by: BugEyedAWD

date: December 30, 2007

It was pretty cool. The sound however. i do agree is a bit rough. There are parts where the music seemed like it was louder than the voice. i hope theres more :D

Score: 7

"It's pretty good but..."

by: SyNn3r

date: December 24, 2007

The animation is a little rough around the edges and the sound really needs improvement. The voice acting is good but the sound quality ruins it....

Score: 10

"Not bad. I like it."

by: bomarc

date: December 23, 2007

This is a good series. The voices were quiet, but I love it nonetheless. Cannot wait for episode 2!

Score: 9

"Not bad, not bad at all"

by: emo-penguin

date: December 23, 2007

The voices were kinda quiet though so itwas difficult to figure out what was going on, other than that bravo this is something i'd like to see more of

Score: 8

"Wow"

by: TerminathisMF

date: December 23, 2007

Great storyline and music, but their voices were to quite. I could barely hear them. 3/5 8/10

Score: 7

"Good, but not great"

by: voltairesilvenstein

date: December 23, 2007

Make it more fluid. It seemed like it just sat at some parts and stared at the wall.

Score: 7

"great first submission!"

by: Battosai810

date: December 23, 2007

this was a pretty good animation. interesting story and nice artwork. my main issue was that the sound was kind of imbalanced - the voices were too quiet, and usually overpowered by the music. what i heard, however, was pretty good. the animation was also a little stiff, but that's kind of the anime style, i suppose.
anyway, this was a solid submission, looking forward to see what happens next!

Score: 7

"it's....good."

by: valkrion666

date: December 23, 2007

the only real problem I could find is in the begining when the two charecters
were talking I couldent realy understand what they were saying over the backround
noise. over all a good flash