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Score: 0

"Dont Deserve Life"

by: IKanzAnimate

date: July 29, 2009

You deserve to be drug behind a building and set ablaze with gasoline and pictures of your horrid GIF images that you call flashes

Score: 10

"lol"

by: zookyman2

date: December 31, 2008

go pointlessness that makes it funnier

Score: 0

"How did I know?"

by: AnalPenguinFarming

date: July 12, 2008

Again, I'm giving you a score of 0/10. Why? Because again you've proven that you don't put ANY effort into making flash, but instead you're spamming the portal. The terrible thing is I bet you actually do have SOME flash talent, but you aren't using it at all. I'm going to lay it out again in my format, because it's my job.

Graphics/Animation: 0
There was nothing about this flash that I could consider "graphics" or "animating" of any kind. This is why you have a 0.

Audio: 0.5
Again, you have improved a little bit from the Dot of Excellence, but not by much because...it just wasn't all that impressive.

Originality: 0
Considering you have 4 of these right now, and they're all basically the same - I would say that there's no originality.

Humor: 0
Still hasn't made me crack a smile.

Story: 0
No story.

Overall: 0/10
There's no redeeming quality about this flash. Not one. You need to put effort into your flashes before actually submitting them.

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Score: 3

"Almost nothing of merit"

by: Bezman

date: July 11, 2008

Funky music. Again no credit. Loops badly though.

I liked some of the pics - but some are bad quality and the one thing you've actually done - paste them all in - doesn't seem like it's had a lot of time spent on it. You haven't aligned them or positioned them with a lot of thought.

I did like the winking circle. That made me chuckle for a moment.

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Score: 0

"Pointless"

by: Little-Rena

date: July 11, 2008

I'm guessing the point of this is to get low reviews or something along those lines becuase the flash itself doesn't have a point to it. This is just some still pictures slaped onto a stage with some badly looping music, sure if it looped better it might be a little better but still, wouldn't be much of a flash.

The quality of the pictures is pretty bad, small too so kind of pointless and the audio is also pretty bad quality too, doesn't loop well and everything but you know all this I'm guessing. Do something more productive if you want to use the pictures, make a quiz with them or something, just something with some entertainment value.

0/5

<3

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Score: 1

"Again, completely pointless."

by: YoungAndWise

date: July 10, 2008

It's just a bunch of still images and a song loop. It's the same as the last, just with more pictures and no movement at all. Fallow the same guidance that I left in the previous flash.

If you don't know how to animate things and would like me to show you how to learn, feel free to send me a PM. But please don't waste your time (and our time) with these kind of flashes.

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Score: 2

"I still don't get it."

by: TheBellmaker

date: July 9, 2008

Very nice picture gallery.

Suggestions: I must say, this was even worse that the first. At least the first had some animation, W\while this was a bunch of pics and music. Come on man, you gotta do better than that. Spend some more time on your flashes, make a storyline, and put some real animation into it. How in the world did this pass judgement?

P.S. I looked and saw 2 more dots of excellence :'(

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Score: 1

"Eh..."

by: Shanus

date: July 9, 2008

A sequel to an uninspiring movie, that in itself is has not been improved.

The visual aspect of flash was boring. Only a small jpeg gallery. Needed at least to have some sort of story how the dot "picked up a few hot chicks" A gallery of pictures just isn't fun to watch at all.

The sound was even worse than the first, it was shorter and a bad loop really.

Overall, just work and try and make some story, and animate around it. It doesn't have to be amazing, but just what you made there was too simple and rushed together.

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Score: 1

"Ehhh"

by: Viridis

date: July 8, 2008

Theres not much i can say in this review that i didnt already say in "The dot of excellence 1". To be honest i dont know why you even bothered. Its a white backround, with 10 or so copy pasted pictures on it. And a dot. The dot doesnt even look good!!

The only good thing about it is the music and that'll get you a 1 in this review, and thats even pushing it. Theres nothing for me to say that you could improve on as there's nothing solid for you to base it off. Sorry.

Better luck next time.

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Score: 1

"Once Again..."

by: Metal-Therapy

date: July 8, 2008

Like the first, it simply lacked everywhere and had no positive or redeeming qualities about it whatsoever.
I'm finding it near impossible to give any constructive criticisms on this flash, as there was really nothing ever started here that you could improve upon.
A screen with a bunch of random pictures is hardly a flash. It's terribly boring and pointless. I don't see how anybody could really enjoy this.
I think your wegra adventure flashes had much more potential than this. I would go that route when improving your flash skills in the future.

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