Score: 7
"More comical than sexy"
date: November 23, 2007
Ok, so next time you do something like this, you really do need to study more google images of porn. You'll learn more about what women are shaped like (Granted that they tend to undergo plastic surgery, so might not be totally accurate :P)
The funniest part was the ending, as I never expected that kind of punchline, to be honest. You could have done a 'Scary Movie' style ending, in which the girl gets pinned to the ceiling (Or in this case, the wall) with a torrent of jizz, for example.
Maybe also emphasise the foreplay, as getting undressed can be fun. More options, possibly penalties for kicking them in too early as well. How about making the goal of the game to simeltaneous orgasm? You could lose either way, by shooting first, or not being ready when she finally does.
[Review Request Club]
November 23, 2007
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I'm studing female anatomy don't worry. I'll make it much more interesting to play next time. :3
