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Score: 3

"okay, okay..."

by: tpurgatoryt

date: March 25, 2008

it was a bit better then the last one, but it just seemed that you didnt put in what you could, hmmm, i have realised its your second toon, but on my second toon i was kicking ass, and no im not one of those quick learners when it comes to programs, but i found it plenty easy, so i say practice, practice and practice some more, in a years time you will be popping out awsome flash's like you do a turd =)

Score: 10

"I liked it..."

by: AlbinoTitan

date: January 24, 2008

Very action packed. It's okay that it wasn't the best animation.

Score: 8

"oh!!"

by: Pollorojo

date: January 22, 2008

oh no wonder you draw better now you got a drawing tablet, anyway nice descriptions i didn't understand how he got into the plane but still better try!

Score: 7

"NIce"

by: UniqueName

date: January 19, 2008

It is 100% better than the 1st ep.
i enjoyed reading about the enemies more than the actual movie.
One thing really disturbed me about it tho.
the part when he goes in the plane, is really really bad, and the parachute
was really bad too,
spend more time on the drawings.
i kno its long but it would be sooo worth it.
Ps check out my series and game, and vote 5 ;)

Score: 5

"..."

by: AcepilotZero

date: January 15, 2008

Also not really worthy of Golden Sun music.

Score: 2

"(title in work)"

by: milinko959

date: December 21, 2007

^^Good Points^^
Definitely a bit better than the first one. The animations were slightly better though it still has a lot of the same problems.

^^Needs Improving^^
Very hard to follow. You had that whole "Fast Forward" "Rewind" stuff, which was really confusing and I really had no idea who was shooting who and what character was which. Anyway, drawings still need a lot of work. Try improving them to start with.

Score: 3

"\m/"

by: Haggard

date: December 18, 2007

Definetly better than the first one. The animations are a bit better and the screen didn't "flicker" (in the first one the screen sometimes moved a bit without any reason).

It still needs a lot of work, but I think you are on the right track ;) .

Just work harder on you drawings and a bit more on your animations.

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Score: 7

"Heh"

by: Cyberdevil

date: December 18, 2007

A nice sequell! Even better than part one as well . . . though as I see it you could have put both parts in one part, it would still be well below the size limit. Anyhow, lots of action, lots of variated fighting. The same advice goes for this one - real characters would be much better. Keep up the good work!

-cd-

Score: 8

"Yeah"

by: BloodStrike21

date: December 16, 2007

It is better than the first one, luv the story and the lists of enemies weapons.... it would also nice to have a background on the good guy whos killing everybody.

Score: 2

"Better"

by: Imacow

date: December 16, 2007

-Good-
I thought this was better than the first one by far, but it still needs work. I liked the menu features. It made the flash much more clear. The animation was a little better in this one. I liked how there was more than one enemy this time around.

-Bad-
I thought this flash was harder to understand than the other one. I seriously had no idea what the hell just happened.

-Overall-
Better, but still needs work.

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