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Score: 9

"Some things good and bad"

by: alucardxmeow

date: November 26, 2008

I saw your remake, but for my opinion, everything was a bit more actiony and fast paced in this one.

The sound effects were better in this one also, but explosions are kinda weird. Like when the tank blows up, it looks like it bled.

But I can't just give you a low rating because of your drawing skills!

Afar from the flaws, this flash actually kept me interested, unlike other first time flashes, I close them(lol).

Hang in there and keep on trying!

Score: 10

"heh screw tha bad guys"

by: DecodesAndNumbers

date: July 29, 2008

Phantox your awesome... i saw your remake but i did get mad at seeing one thing on there... the shakyness of the camera... was gone in the remake T_T boo hoo xD

W/E you still have the numero uno hentai games and galleries on NG

Score: 2

"ahuh . . . . i see?"

by: tpurgatoryt

date: March 25, 2008

that was so cool, well not really, i can do better then that in an hour, yep. that just seemed like u didnt try at all, i can relate to you not being a good drawer, some people just cant controll that mouse, but seriously, the animation its self, not the graphics, the animation the movement was shocking, no shit its fbf, but yeah i say just muck around on flash, have some practice, like if i wanna learn somthing, i sit there on flash just repeating and repeating till im happy with it.

Score: 7

"hey um"

by: Pollorojo

date: January 22, 2008

nice attempt however this is crap compared to what you can make now right?

Score: 5

"..."

by: AcepilotZero

date: January 15, 2008

It's okay, but not good enough to qualify for Golden Sun music.

Score: 5

"it r okay"

by: kyubinin

date: January 14, 2008

yeah the animation really sucks im sorry to say. the action was okay. if u scuk at drawing on the computer but good on paper u should get one of dem convertible tablets. they're bassicaly laptops except u could rotate the screen 180 degrees push it down over the keyboard and the screen becomes abig touch screen. they are mad awsome.

Score: 3

"Pretty bad use of sticks"

by: Sir-Nuts

date: December 22, 2007

I've seen some better animations using stick figues. Yours wasn't bad, but it does need some work. It had some good things, like the sounds. I liked them, there was a nice variety there. Some of the fighting scenes weren't that bad.

I don't want to be very harsh, but I hated the blood you've drawn on the fighting scenes. Seriously, all those red lines almost ruined the entire scene. You must improve on those scenes.

And on the scene that the guy was reloading his gun it showed nothing, just a steady image. You should show him reloading the gun, not leaving just a steady image. I thought my computer lagged on that scene.

I'll watch part two now, I hope its better than this one.

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Score: 3

"(title in work)"

by: milinko959

date: December 21, 2007

^^Good Points^^
Well the fighting wasn't so bad. It's a decent start to a series and submitting movies and getting criticism is always a good way to begin to improve upon your work.

^^Needs Improving^^
I already watched the second one, but I really don't understand why you didn't include that really long paragraph about the storyline in this first episode. This one is basically just a big fight scene without it. Also, you should try working on your blood drawings. The mass of red lines really isn't cutting it.

Score: 8

"Heh"

by: Cyberdevil

date: December 18, 2007

Well I usually don't tend to get too much entertainment out of stick movies, but this is an exception. The plot isn't much, and the different events are random, but it's full of action and variated fighting scenes. Would be better with real characters instead of sticks, but it's good as it is as well, keep it up!

-cd-

Score: 3

"\m/"

by: Haggard

date: December 18, 2007

The graphics are pretty crappy, but I can see that you at least put some effort into this, as your animations are decent.
It's also a good thing that you used some backgrounds. Ok, those backgrounds don't look that great, but at least you cared about it ;) .

The sound and music are another good thing, as most of those "first flashes" don't have any of these.

You definetly have to work a lot on drawing and animating blood and explosions, as those were basically just some red lines in front of the stick figures.
I think there are some "blood drawing"-tutorials out there, just look through the tutorials collection ;) .

Two points for the effort, 1 point for the flash itself. Makes up for 3 out of 10.
Just keep working on you drawing and animation skills and I am sure you will create much better flashes than this soon.

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