Score: 7
"Decent short flash"
date: November 6, 2007
It was a decent flash, the Back to the Future reference is pretty funny. But what I think you need to work on is your drawing. The lines and everything on the characters look a little.... "sharp." Try and find a way to smoothing out the lines, and sometimes the animation looks a little weak. I think that there is some stuff that you could animate better, like the little walking part. It's little, but maybe try spinning sun rays for the sun, instead of changing the lines every frame. The spinning just makes it look cleaner IMO.
So smooth out those lines, it sort of makes the flash look quickly and roughly drawn.
November 6, 2007
Author's Response:
aye...the art and animation was intented to be like that to give that happy go lucky cartoon look, look at my other flashes, this is pretty crappy looking in comparison.