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Score: 3

"Meh..."

by: Fire1052

date: November 2, 2007

Pretty good up until the cat mauling.
Then you got kinda lazy with the animating?

Score: 4

"good but...."

by: creepyboy

date: November 2, 2007

...it needs a preloader it get stuck in some parts.

Score: 5

"coolo (2 o's means u)"

by: mafiainexile

date: November 2, 2007

good. It is fun. try putting a preloader. Its actually acceptable. You need to define the point better

Score: 4

"Little choppy"

by: randomperson16

date: November 2, 2007

The movement of the Lion and cat are a bit choppy. But it is a okay flash for the first one you've made. Passable.

Score: 6

"for ur first time in flash good job"

by: HELLRAISER5000

date: November 2, 2007

it was a good idea but ya ive seen the characters before. is good but try to make it so it dosnt look like slides, just one full smooth flash. hoping to see ur second one

Score: 7

"Nice"

by: Paito

date: November 2, 2007

Its reall good considering its your first animation, well done on that. Hope to see you do more and try harder.

Score: 5

"ummm ok i guess"

by: halofan333

date: November 2, 2007

Kon=awesome
Video=sorta cool

Tips:
nice bleach sound bits keep those
make a little longer