Score: 4
"Way too much dialouge"
date: October 9, 2009
There was too much dialogue. Honestly, please plan out your script carefully. You blabber too much with your writing, not actually establishing anything worthwhile to read.
Its as if you just rushed everything. There was WAY too much dialogue per character. Like 4 pages of it for 1 person! Normally games have maximum 2 pages for each character in normal circumstances.
But you have over done it.