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Score: 7

"Not bad"

by: Kryptonite803

date: June 25, 2008

I liked the message and it carried a heavy vibe with it, but a couple things through it off. First, I think the narration using "I" and such would be better placed in the beginning, then the Lethal Injection scene can take place, then the narration of "afterlife", ending again at the cemetery. At least, thats how I would have done it.

Good work anyway.

Score: 7

"Good Subject/Meaning"

by: dirtofgrandeur

date: May 7, 2008

You hit well on the horrible things people will do in war. While I certainly hope nothing so horrifying is ever developed, I'd still say you did a good job presenting that idea, intentionally or otherwise.
My only real complaint is that the style seemed to change too often. It was surreal through that, but kinda hard to watch because of it

Score: 10

"O_o............."

by: guitarhero2008

date: March 20, 2008

the first time i almost threw up,the second time,well,when he ripped his skin open,my arm was killing me just watching him eat himself,and...well....it....was...aws ome!but feel sick

Score: 10

"Wow"

by: jman111

date: February 29, 2008

So beautiful,so twisted. I like it.One thing though, did the guy eat himself?

Score: 9

"Disturbingly Beautiful"

by: Excovon

date: January 10, 2008

I loved this, I haven't reviewed you in a long time though, but this is simply astounding, one of your best yet. :] Keep it up, I'm supporting you.

Score: 10

"(bleagh!)"

by: abrhamlincoln

date: January 6, 2008

i reckon the military was testing a bioweapon on a criminal. i hurled after i saw it

Score: 10

"Nice"

by: Dragonu

date: November 27, 2007

The graphic is good and the story is captivating.However your other flash animation"oxygen" had a story that i didn't understand.Could you explain to me what is happening in that animation?

Score: 7

"Interestingly sytilistic."

by: squeakytoad

date: November 20, 2007

I think you tried a little too hard though. You made it so "funky" (the first word that came to mind) that it lost the bizarre feel it seemed to be reaching for.

I'll start with the ugly, so that I can end on a positive note.
The drawings were just... random. When "death" appeared, I felt like laughing. It looked so... silly. Was that intentional?
Other parts just left me thinking, "Why'd he do that?" Examples would include the unfinished manaquin-like character lying on the 'floor' surrounded by pink and lime green, the mouth talking before the scientists proceeded upon the subject, and the subject lying on the floor- he's got all these bumps all over, and his lines are a mess. Looks like you didn't feel like finishing that drawing.
You also went too far with the effects at times. For instance, your mouth (or someone's) in red overtone in the background of that one scene. What was up with that?

There was a good amount of positive things to say though.
I liked the mood you were setting, accompanied by well-done ambiance and sound effects. Some of the character animation was good as well.
I liked some of the colors you used. I wish you hadn't left so much blank whiteness though. That wasn't appealing.

Wasn't that bad though. Interesting idea as well.

At least it was original and effort was placed into this. If only other animators would TRY something new.
I'd rather watch this than 'Super Mario Bros Z' crap any day.

Good work. Keep animating.

-st

Score: 9

"I don't quite know what to say..."

by: ShinigamiRem

date: November 14, 2007

The fact that this is a great flash is evident. The premise, art, story, even the sounds were great. This was pretty freaky, though, with self-cannibalism (is there a word for that?), blood, needles, all that happy stuff. This was an excellent flash, but thatnks to you i now stand here, in front of my computer, shivering not because of the cold.

Score: 10

"lenard is right."

by: KromeHeart

date: November 12, 2007

that was really fucking awsome. i give it 5/5 and 10/10 and rarely do that.