Score: 8
"Very well done."
date: October 29, 2007
Well, I think that as a whole piece it works very well indeed, but I guess the fine line between tongue-in-cheek twisted humor and analytical heavy drama is somewhat blurred here, at least to me, based upon how the cartoon begins and ultimately how it turns out. I suppose one could say that it was your intent to do this, but I would go even further ands say that much like all art, it is subjective and should indeed stay that way, so I really don't want to know exactly how you meant your message to be taken. It's a statement obviousely, but the fasion in which it is being presented is what remains obscure to my own mind's eye.
By the way, unless newgrounds themselves called you on it, I don't see the need in updating your description with a little clarification of it being a criticism. I mean, it's obvious enough to me, and if the kiddies and ignorant folks out there take it as glorification ofd the act, then so be it, you have no reason to be so overly carefull about the statement.