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Score: 6

"wel...."

by: kcajy

date: October 6, 2007

good funny story line and all but the animation looks unrealistic... try speeding it up a bit and not using as many motion tweens i find they make it look too smooth for real life

Score: 6

"Meh!"

by: aquawhite07

date: October 5, 2007

Not the best animation i've seen...

A little more violence and more weapons would suffise for this loss on marks! Less blood would also get rid of the detterence...

Score: 4

"I really don't know why this is on the front page."

by: ReillyReilly

date: October 5, 2007

There are plenty of things more violent and entertaining. You should work a bit more with animating some things and not relying on tweening things. It is the little things that make the difference; like animating the adjustment of the lighter flame when thrown, and why was the cigarette already burned? Taking the time to make the bouncing of the soccer ball look more fluid would be a plus, and if felt like there was no power behind the bat. It seems like it just needed more time.

Also, I agree with the last review, two people is not really a massacre. Keep working on stuff and put a little more time into the animation. The concept was good but it didn't really work.

Score: 9

"LOL Great"

by: Major-Blood

date: October 5, 2007

Wasn't the best animation, but it was still great!

Score: 5

"..."

by: phreeck988

date: October 5, 2007

Good drawing
Bad animation
Bad Plot
Too Slow

A double homicide isn't much of a massacre.
Neck bones are not like those you see on a jolly roger.
It looked like he was giving his dad love taps with a baseball bat.

You have talent, but this is definately not showcasing it.
Keep making more, you'll get better.

Score: 5

"weird"

by: HerbSmoker420

date: October 5, 2007

You shouldn't make fun of turtles!

Score: 10

"Lame"

by: Wonderer

date: October 5, 2007

This video has some styles but the animation was not professional, first of all the bouncing ball is lame, and also the fire on the ligher should always goes upwards, it's not a jet turbine. and you don't get a reload sound when you turn the bat around,

man this s*** is lame. I give it a 10 for lameness

whatever, couldn't be bothered

Score: 4

"Not too bad"

by: gokou2005

date: October 5, 2007

Not horrible. That was one messed up turtle. Enjoyed the narration. Maybe a better story or plot next time. It seemed like the dad just started going off for nothing. It didn't really seem to have much to do with the sandwich.

Score: 4

"Turtle"

by: Lennaerd

date: October 5, 2007

This movie is way to violence. Kinda sick actually.. anyway the movements of the turtle etc are really boring. I only liked the intro with the black and white interaction. But thats about it.

Score: 5

"I like violence but..."

by: platimberg

date: October 5, 2007

I like violence such as Madness Combat and all, but there is a point where violence is way over the limit, such as TOO MUCH details when killing (e.g Happy Tree Friends) I guess such violence isn't for me, but excellent graphics and err... details, but the storyline has to be improved.