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Score: 6

"Good first attempt, but needs improvement"

by: Lesbian-Waffles

date: October 7, 2007

The graphics were very decent, I specifically like the grayed out blood splatter parts. However the two issues driving this one down were two things:

1. Story...I was very bored. Nothing much happened despite some very funny dialog and great voice acting. A story is the single most important aspect of any animation - "Pixar".

2. Animation. You can draw, but your animation is very weak. Really think about how a character would move, react, etc... Also look up what secondary motion is. Animating well is even more important than good art (example XIAO XIAO has no aspect of good art, yet holds it's own simply by amazing animation).

Score: 3

"meh..."

by: MrNG

date: October 7, 2007

Don't know what to say. The sound was good definetely but the animation was ok considering it was your first. I think you can do a lot better.

Score: 4

"Hmmm"

by: Blackdragon27

date: October 7, 2007

The sound was good, and it looked nice, but the storyline was stupid. The guy killed a kid over a sandwich and kills his father because he forgot the egg salad. I like mindless violence, it can be pretty funny. But this was semi-mindless, between the line of a fair revenge and a mindless slaughter, and i'm not a fan the that catagory inbetween, so 4/10.

Score: 2

"Shit"

by: slaughterjockey77

date: October 7, 2007

the only reason I give this any points is for the sound of the rain in the preloader

Score: 8

"cool, cool"

by: skullsword

date: October 7, 2007

this is'nt bad, violence is always a awsome laughing sensation and killing sprees are cool (even short one's!)

Score: 8

"not bad"

by: forgottenwun

date: October 7, 2007

anger issues always make for a good show

Score: 10

"nice nice"

by: princekanden

date: October 7, 2007

i was waiting whole flash for boy turtle to get his shell cracked.

Score: 8

"lol"

by: el-inca

date: October 7, 2007

lol that shit was funny though it still is abit slow for my liking, violence was alright dunno what people are complaning about, graphics are cool. overall ill give you an 8 just cuz it made me chuckle.

Score: 0

"wtf"

by: coolmonkey577

date: October 7, 2007

this thing is fucking totally violent

Score: 3

"omfg wtf?"

by: cansrfunny

date: October 7, 2007

gore is ok but that was frikkin imature and excessive!!!!!