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Score: 7

"A couple of large glitches but still a solid game"

by: powerpinch

date: October 22, 2007

There are a couple of very big glitches- one with the second boss (i found hitting play started the fight anyways but the mushrooms in the fight did nothing and when i won it started the fight over again >.>) And during the first boss if you did it right you could get behind the walls and stand behind where his arms could get you shooting him like crazy and jumping when the spikes came making him uber easy i think if you can fix these i might come back and finish up the storyline mode :) i really think you should fix it and also when i bought the rocket launcher i just had the normal gun when i started the level that REALLY bugged me.

Score: 5

"not too bad"

by: Tidola

date: October 10, 2007

this is not too bad but i like it!

Score: 8

"Good"

by: Chzz

date: October 5, 2007

The good things: I liked the way you shoot, the shopping idea and the little rock monsters. The graphic was also very well.

The bad thing: The cactus monster couldn't die.

I give you 5/5 in vote, and 8/10 here.
Make more of this!

Score: 7

"Fun"

by: super6nacho

date: October 3, 2007

Dear artist. The Good: cool music which is actully one of my favs. And the weapons were cool. The Improve: You could improve the grapics and there are some glicthes. Still cool game.

Score: 7

"Good"

by: Auz

date: October 3, 2007

The good parts: I think the graphics were okay. The background looked pretty good (especially the sky in the desert level) and the things on the foreground looked alright too. Also, it´s very nice that this game has a save option. I didn´t have to start over from the beginning now in case I got stuck or anything, that was good. What kind of suprised me in a positive way was that I found very few bugs. I expected a lot of things wouldn´t work properly, but this wasn´t the case.

The bad parts: I didn´t found my bugs like I just said. But sadly I found one very big one. I got stuck in the story mody at the second boss :( During the conversation the screen suddenly turned black, the music kept playing and nothing else happened. I reloaded my game, tried for a second time and again the screen turned black. You should take a look at this. Also, I think you might get stuck if you don´t have any ammo in a stage where you have to kill all enemies or destroy some of those platforms. It didn´t happen to me, luckily, but it would be a shame if you have to quit your game for that. You should allow us to go back to the shop or make the handgun have unlimited ammo. Another bad point was that the normal enemies were way too easy to defeat. Those rocks and mushrooms only moved up and down and from the right the left a little, they didn´t seem to be attacking or anything. I was hit only once by them and my only concern in the game was my ammo amount. So try to make the enemies stronger.

Overall 7 out of 10, 3 out of 5. I think it was quite an enjoyable game, but it could still use some improvement. I hope you can fix that stuff at level 2´s boss, cause it kinda ruined the game for me :(

~Auz, Review Request Club

Score: 6

"(title in work)"

by: milinko959

date: October 1, 2007

^^Good Points^^
Definitely a pretty good job on one of your first games. The graphics were pretty refreshing, and made the game more playable. It reminded me of the desert level of SMB3 for obvious reasons. Simple gameplay, and not too many bugs, though I will mention some below. Keep working on it!

^^Needs Improving^^
First off, jumping was a little strange, when next to a low platform. Sometimes, I guess your foot hits a low platform, stopping you, which is just annoying. Also, I found that you can fall through vertically stretched platforms. Not sure if you meant for this, but it seems more like a bug to me. One more thing: you may want to consider using WASD rather than the arrow keys, as it is just easier when using the mouse.

Score: 6

"Not bad"

by: Coop83

date: September 30, 2007

The plot is a little linear, as with most platform games, sadly. I'd like to see better graphics and also an easier way around the first boss - break the player in gently, with a first boss that has an easy way around, then crank it up on the second one.

I have no idea what those bad guy things were, they looked kind of like ambient turds, wandering around the place. I'd reccomend that you get more different kinds of enemies, which act differently. It looks like you've borrowed a bit from Super Mario and Sonic - the two classic platform games. Look at their different arrays of enemies and work from that.

The drawing style will improve as you go on, so I look forward to seeing your next submission.

[Review Request Club]

Score: 7

"Interactive."

by: 2good2b4goten

date: September 30, 2007

This game had some nice potential. You really coded it well, there were many features that made the game enjoyable.

The reason I feel the score is at a low is because of the visuals. While they were slightly above par they could do with a lot of work. The environments are plain and repetitive as well, try and spice it up a bit.

Also, the speed of the animation was boringly slow. It really got me off the game.

If you can make it a little faster, and fix the visuals all around... then you will be looking possibly at a score of 3.8+

Good luck!

Score: 6

"the game is ok"

by: didinko

date: September 29, 2007

6/10 for the effort. No offence but the gameplay sucks - it's too slow and the hitTset is a problem; 2nd - improve your graphics and change the characters!

Score: 7

"Pretty good"

by: Imacow

date: September 29, 2007

-Good-
The story for this was pretty good. The idea was interesting. The graphics were alright. The characters walk cycle sorta looked like he was limping alittle. I thought that the background you used was realy great, but I didn't like that you overused it in every level. The gameplay worked, but could have been better.

-Bad-
I thought the game was slow. You character could have moved faster and the ability to double jump would have been helpful. I didn't like how the enemys had different alpha levels as you shot them, it didn't make that much sence.

-Overall-
A well done game, but could have been better.

~Review Request Club~