Score: 8
"Nice"
date: November 27, 2009
I only gave you a 8 simply for the reason that 1, I don't like odd numbers, and 2, when you have them skating in the race, it looks more like their body is leading, rather then their feet. In real life, when you actually skate, it's the opposite. You lead with your feet and the body follows. For improvement on your technique, you should probably go watch some actual skaters and pay attention to how their body and, more importantly, how their feet move when they wheel from point A to point B. It's less like walking, the way you have it, and more like gliding. I mean, their on wheels, for criss sake, but while the animation is smooth, their skating is choppy.
Otherwise, you did a beautiful job. Your artwork is lovely and your animation is just as. (Except in the end where she's leaning on the pole and her legs are crossed. When a real girl stands like that, there's no little triangle between your thighs. What when your girlfriend does it, sometime.) Anyway, beautiful job. I really liked it and I can't wait to see the rest of this series.
~Freya's Daughter~
