Score: 10
"(title in work)"
date: November 12, 2007
^^Good Points^^
A decent Clock Day movie. I think there were a good amount of jokes in here, and the ending was somehow unexpected and comical. Good usage of the v-cam throughout this movie.
^^Needs Improving^^
First, the text was hard to read in the "10 weeks of practicing" scene. What did they have? 640 whats? Anyway, not big deal. I have to say though, I was kind of bored with this from about half way through. Just not enough good jokes to pass the time well. Still good though.
November 12, 2007
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. It helped a lot. I do agree that it some parts it gets boring. After I finished it hours before clockday, I didnt have much time to touch it up. I was planning on putting some background music in some parts to liven it up, but it never happened in time. Next movie I make, I will try to put some more life into it. Much <3 for the help.