Score: 0
"If you are looking for talent... go somewere else"
date: August 25, 2009
The sad part is that i actually had to force myself to finish watching this to give a honest review. so i came up with a few pointers.
1 > make sure that your title is appropriate for the animation. this is not hentai... so don't call it that.
2 > work on your sound quality. it is sad to say that the intro before the vid was the only thing that could be heard clearly. the voice acting was so terrible that i actually couldn't understand most of what was said.
3 > animation.... when there are voice acting parts make sure to dub them. this requires more effort than you were apparently willing to put out. try making your characters move verses just alternating between two pics. want help look up tweening in your flash tutorial.
4 > scripting... judging by what i could hear. your scripting talents are nil. one of the best methods i have found in creating a good script is actually to "throw your ideas around" "get feed-back" Before you start your project. odds are you will get a good idea if people will accept your "storyline" before you start your project.
Honestly overall the intro was the only good part of this animation. the rest was worse than a disappointment.
