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Score: 10

"awesome"

by: johto1

date: July 16, 2008

pleaze make more vids i like your first chapter and if your looking for good movies then click author and type spikevallentine its so sweat

Score: 9

"Fantastic!"

by: wolfkeeper

date: April 22, 2008

Damn, I loved the flash.
The only problems I had were some of the lines.
The animation was great.
The male voices were kinda generic.
glad your keeping it up so keep going.
9/10

Score: 8

"notbad, but..."

by: flamereaver

date: January 6, 2008

you've mispelld syndicate or was it supose to be called syndacite, but you should know that there is no word in english that is spelled syndacite. Anothe flaw i've found was the animation it was smooth enough but it was'nt that neat like the other animations i have seen.

Score: 8

"It's a great animation"

by: Coolio-Niato

date: December 14, 2007

But I feel I've seen it before elsewhere on NG...

Score: 8

"Syndacite... theres a Syndacite that rule Sydney?"

by: Pandora-Productions

date: November 7, 2007

man... what an accurate drawing of Sydney...
it was in that condition when i visited that last year *teehee*
excellent animation and frame by frame (i animate a similar way, it's a total bitch innit?)

everything about it was canny good, loved the lines
"if it was her you'd be dead"
"i swear it was *URRK GAHHHH FUCK*" (e.g. im dead)
"thats more like it"

but some areas were like... well for one a bit bad in relms of script writing
"you cant beat me i was your old fighting trainer"
i actually shouted "Hello?! plot hole!" at my laptop (cue bemused look from my girlfriend)

looking forward to the next one however

apparently your best...

so we shall see!

Score: 10

"5 FOR YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

by: Snowman

date: September 14, 2007

Yo, this is instantly in my favorites, this has to be the number one flash ive seen all week, WHEN IS THE NEXT CHAPTER, THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Score: 9

"great for a chapter 1"

by: nina1

date: July 16, 2007

Now that was awesomly wicked-ass animation, and thats just the first chapter. Im definitely goin to put u on my authur list ya know, cuz this is one series I know Im goin to get a kick out of it.

CAN'T WAIT TO SEE UR NEXT CHAPTER ^__^

Score: 10

"good"

by: ichigo11

date: July 15, 2007

it was ok

Score: 8

"lol"

by: Marshmellow01

date: July 15, 2007

woot make more

i think you cna improve on the sound recording like when they yell or osmething it fuzzes out and u cant really hear what tthey say

Score: 7

"Heh"

by: CaptAcid

date: July 15, 2007

I liked the idea, very nice fight choreography, but that line "Give me what you got bitch" seemed very out of place coming from her teacher. Usually there is respect for the student and/or teacher, it just didnt seem apporpiate to his charecter, seeing how he respected her in the beginning (by saying "If it was her, you would be dead by now") then disregarding that same intuition later. I like where this is going, but if this is going to be a series, it seemed a little early to give the hero a monumental accomplishment such as killing the teacher. Seems like a waste of a potential established villian. Or even an anti-villian. Im a big believer in that a story is only as good as its bad guy. But this is only the start, I look forward to seeing what you have in store for us.

As for the technical side, the voices were clear, if somewhat distant sounding, the animations were very pleasent to watch, the scenery was a little dull and mono-color. Not a bad start, with room for potential. Good Luck!