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that was a neat animation. this one here had a cool, original concept behind it, nice characters and it was fun to watch. i found it to be a little bit short overall, but it was still quite nice to watch and your efforts in this one were good.

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Hey thanks for noticing. Ya I should've spent more time on this one even if it was a test in a sense. When I get to work on this I'll make sure it's much, much, longer.

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Score: 4

"hmm"

by: woe177

date: July 14, 2007

hmmm... nice but sounds needs lots of work take a litte more time next time any thing to do with woe i take interest in so make it good

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No worries. I won't dissapoint you.

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Score: 8

"I liked it"

by: Chemical-Disaster

date: July 14, 2007

You certanly have skills as an animator, and that did show off your skills. Dont care about al that Clishe nonsence its just a flash mivie, not a hollywood, and still most of those are less entertaining than this. I think your graphigs need a biy of work, thin down the outlines, or at leist if you want tu use thick black ones, keep the same thickness over all your drawings. I loves your main character, the beard was a good addition and the mullet was SHOCKING! perfect!

keep animating with some improvement you could be realy, realy good.

- Rach

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Thanks man, I'll keep the stuff you said in mind.

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Score: 5

"This is my constructive criticism"

by: Funkylikamonkey

date: July 14, 2007

I can see what you tried to do here but i strongly recommend u dont. The whole idea is very cliche and used way too often in movies (both box-office and flash). If you do however want to do this sort of action flash here are a couple of tips:
-Dont try to save time by avoiding frame by frame animation. (I know this because i am a repeat offender). It just makes the animation look dodgy.
- Make the voices a lot louder than the music .
- For fight scenes (or scenes with any sort of heavy animation) spend a long time on each frame (im talking like 5 minutes minimum. 20minutes for really good ones)
- Use both shadows and highlights in ur shading (makes the characters seem more 3D)
-Do something fancy with some of the violence like slo-mo, multiple shots etc
- Do something unique with graphics such as black-and-white or high-contrast colouring.

Anyway i hope that helped :P

Other than all that i think u have potential in that u obviously know how to use flash.
3/5

Author's Response:

Thanks this is a great review. Alot of helpful advice which I will for sure use. I will add shading, spend more time, make voices louder, and etc.
And don't worry. The whole "good warrior" uber-fighter thing was just a joke in this. To give a quick example of the story is the guy saw his father killed as a child whiched screwed up his head 'causeing him to later kill his own family and betray his country in the future. He's more of a villian then a hero.
Agian thanks. This is possibly the most helpful/best review I've gotten so far on NG.

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Score: 6

"it was all right..."

by: gazellecarcass

date: July 14, 2007

but at first i was like... "oh SHIZZIE!! is that CHUCK NORRIS!!"

but than i was all like: "oh... His name be woe! That's crunk!"

and now i am all like: "A fitting name for a good warrior..."

GREAT!!!

Author's Response:

lol The whole "good warrior" thing was just a joke me and Darryl quickly came up with. We we're tryin' to make fun of the ol'school japanese movies.

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Score: 5

"pluh?"

by: CrateOfRum

date: July 14, 2007

Well the graphics were a little too . . . childish. They remind me of drawings i used to see back in 4th grade. My suggestion is redraw, and use a original story. The whole "Super Duper Cool Warrior Guy" story got old with Conan. But, that's just my opinion. If you want to go far, be as original as possible and make sure ur art is the best it can be.
Good Try, But It Isn't My Cup of Tea.

Author's Response:

He ain't no "Super Duper Cool Warrior Guy" like I said a got a big ass original story.
He's pretty much more of a badguy who's killed his own family and betrayed his country just to gain some money.
Sayin' the graphics were childish I think was a little harsh. I admit the backgrounds were rushed but I did spend some time on the characters detialing the muscles and wrinkles of clothing.

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Score: 8

"Not bad."

by: lollermachine

date: July 14, 2007

I enjoyed it.

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Thanks but listen. I know ya just signed up a few days ago on NG here but ya need to leave better reviews. This review has no constructive critizm or anything helpful period in it. I'm glad ya enjoyed it but please give an actual opinion about what you watch other then somethin' as standard as "Not bad, I enjoyed it."

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Score: 7

"Yeah, pretty good."

by: Shadow-Panda

date: July 14, 2007

I'd watch the sequel(if made), even though the graphics were a bit mushy. all in good time i guess. smooth animation was nice

3/5

(lol gotta luv the bandanna in front of mouth trick)

Author's Response:

Yeah I need to work on the graphics for this a bit I thought too. I may have overdetialed it. If I make it a little simpler it would be easier to animate.
lol Yeah I hate lip sync so I pulled every trick to aviod it.