Score: 7
"K"
date: May 2, 2007
^^Good Points^^
You have a keen style of drawing and animation. A very unique design of Pico and a very unique storyline. It was interesting to watch this, with the powerful music. Very interesting.
^^Needs Improving^^
Some parts of this seemed like just sketches or storyboard. Looked unfinished with little background detail.
Author's Response:
On the Improvements,
My next flash (for Clockday)has allready being completly story-borded unlike all my flash upto this point and is going well so the problems should be fix.
thanks for the review