Score: 7
"A rare, (but nice) movie."
date: April 25, 2007
Unlike most movies on NG, this actually has a somewhat positive message about emo kids. Rather than calling emos "fags" and showing them cutting their wrists in the corner, you showed a kid having a bad day and being made fun of. I respect that.
The first problem I saw was the lack of character animation. Once you get the characters moving better, you could make something incredible.
Second, you should put the songs in the credits.
Third, the songs sound messy the way you cut them at the end. It could be better.
And the radio at the beginning just seems to be there for too long.
And for suggestions...
Maybe show a few little scenes of a more colorful outside world (maybe have the kid look out the window or something?)
You could also have some fuzzes and lines in some places, like on an old film, just for effect. I think it might look nice, since it fits with the black and white. Of course, that's just my opinion.
Anyway, good movie.
Oh, and I like the fancy border.