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Glad you liked the plot. The sound issues weredue to the wa I used to animate which I won't get into here, but know it's fixed for future installments.

Get your preloaders here: http://planetbob.net/ng/pl/

And thanks for the review!

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Score: 7

"Nice preloader!"

by: LJCoffee

date: April 7, 2007

heh...

Shoulda' used some of my music too!

Not a bad jod on this - decent animation - the techniques are fine, you should just look into pretty-ing up the graphics a bit and your overall quality will much higher.

Not sure about the script as I'm too fuzzy from last night to really keep track of it all but You'll get my vote to save it!

later mate!

Author's Response:

I love this preloader. Hope you like the added sound to it!

Glad you liked the movie, too and as for graphics, they will be getting a once over for the next installment and in all my future Flashes.

Thanks for reviewing!

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Score: 7

"Interesting"

by: CastIronCough

date: April 7, 2007

An interesting start. It's a little slow though, and doesn't really start to pick up until the end. Kind of reminds me of the movie "Audition", if you've ever seen it. Anyway, maybe you could add a little slapstick inbetween the punch lines in order to keep the audience's attention. Either that, or liven the dialogue up a little. Otherwise, it was pretty funny, and I'll be looking for the next episode.